3 Easy Fixes to Get People Reading Your Writing

My main tips to stand out

🚀 In 6 months I went from 0 to making a living through online writing and creating.
If I can do it, so can you. A paid subscription gets you:

• Full access to my Grow Your Substack Course: This course is packed with tutorial videos, workshops, and everything you need to grow your Substack. Normally, this is valued at $437, but it’s all yours as part of your subscription.

• Exclusive community access for writers: Join a private space where we can connect, share ideas, and support each other. It’s usually $37/month, but you’re in for free.

That’s a total value of $474, all for just $7/month or even better—$60/year 🤯.

---

Ever feel like no one's paying attention to your writing?

I've been there too. You write and write and just don’t understand why people are not reading your stuff. Often times, your skills are already there, you just need some tweaks to make people come back for more of your writing.

I've helped other writers make simple changes that hook readers, and I'd love to share them.

So today, let's get into three easy fixes that can turn casual browsers into engaged readers:

1. Hooking them from the very first line

2. Making your writing easy on the eyes

3. Ending with a bang that leaves them wanting more

Believe me, these small adjustments can make a big difference.

If you’re looking to get paid for your words, here are some resources to help you achieve that:

Weekly Resource List:

• 7 Simple Steps to Improve Your Writing and Get More Done

• The Secret to Great Headlines: What New Writers Need to Know

---

3 Easy Fixes to Get People Reading Your Writing

Imagine your writing like a Netflix show.

If the first episode grabs attention and each scene flows smoothly, people will binge the whole season. But if the plot is confusing or drags on, they’ll switch to something else before you get to the good part.

Unfortunately, most people don’t realize that good articles follow a similar pattern. People don’t get hooked, are demotivated to read because of the design, and within a second of a click, close your hard-worked article for good.

It can be pretty sucky.

I’ve been asked to give feedback on other people’s writing lately, and I keep seeing the same topics coming up.

But here’s the good news: with a few small changes, you can ensure that your texts stand out from the crowd and are actually read.

1. You’re Not Grabbing Them Right Away

The beginning of your post is (next to the headline) one of the most important parts. Think of it like an opening scene in a movie or show. If it doesn’t catch your attention, you’ll lose interest fast. The same thing happens with your readers.

Tip: Start with a story, an interesting fact, or something personal. People love stories because they feel connected to them.

Instead of diving straight into your topic, try to open with something that pulls them in. A surprising fact, a question, or a quick personal story can work wonders.

The goal is to make your readers curious and want to keep reading.

For example:
Last year, I was staring at my screen, trying to figure out why no one was reading my stuff. Then a friend gave me some feedback, and it hit me. I was just dumping info on people. I wasn’t telling a story.

A personal touch or a relatable story makes your readers feel like they’re on your journey. It’s all about creating that connection from the start.

2. Your Writing Looks Like a Wall of Text

Even if you write the best stories ever if your text looks like a giant block of text, people will jump off before they’ve even started reading. How your text looks is just as important as what you say.

Tip: Break it up with white space, bullet points, and short paragraphs.

Most readers skim first. They’re deciding in seconds if your article is worth their time. So, make it easy on the eyes from the jump.

Break up your paragraphs. Keep them short, three or four lines at most. Throw in a single sentence paragraph every now and then to keep things varied. Bullet points are great for the eyes as well.

• Short paragraphs help keep the reader engaged

• Bullet points make key points stand out

• White space gives the reader some breathing room

The easier your article is to read, the more likely it is that someone will read it through to the end.

3. You’re Not Ending Strong

Think about the last time you read a great article and think about what usually sticks with you. Right, the ending.

Tip: Finish with something to think about.

Maybe it’s an insightful quote, a lesson, or a thought-provoking message. The goal is to leave them feeling like they’ve gained something valuable. If you can, try to tie your ending back to your opening to make everything come full circle.

For example:
You can’t control who clicks on your articles, but you can control how you design them. Focus on telling a good story that is easy to understand and makes readers think. If you do that, you’ll see that more people will stick around to read what you have to say.

It’s not so difficult to write good articles when you incorporate those three tips.

What I personally like to do is to just write down a brief structure of my post. For example, for this one, it looked like this.

• Intro: Starting it off with a metaphor, people love to get into the stories

• Personal insight: Recently I was asked to give feedback on other’s people writing and more often than not it’s the same three things

• Valuable information:

1. Storytelling. Set the scene. Start with an interesting fact, a hook, make it personal.

2. Design of the article. White space, bullet points, paragraphs (max 3–4 lines)

3. Leave them with a bang. A message to learn etc.

• Finish with a learning: How I structure this article.

This is all I had and it helped me structure and write down the entire article in a way that would be helpful for the readers.

---

Learning of the Week

Last week I added a poll to my newsletter and set it for three days. The question was: What topics would you like to see more often in this newsletter?

After the 3 days were up, I thought it would be cooler if the poll ran forever, so I changed the setting to “forever”. The problem was that this restarted the poll and all the votes were gone. Sigh. Luckily I wrote down what it was, so here we go:

• How to get more subscribers - 12.5%

• Hot to get paid subscribers - 25%

• How to start an online business - 0%

• How to build a community - 25%

• How to improve my writing - 37.5%

Since it seems that many of you would like to learn more about writing, let's see which part excites you the most.

---

Can you believe there are 1380 of us here now? 🤯

If you are thinking about monetizing your efforts like the other 1380 achievers, then join our Wander Wealth Community

If a subscription is not possible, please comment, like, share. It really helps.

---

PS... If you're enjoying this newsletter, please consider referring it to a friend.

And whenever you’re ready, here are 3 ways I can help you:

1. Grab my Substack Crash Course on how to get started and grow your Substack. Currently with a Halloween Special Discount until the 31st. Get it here. 👻

2. Join our Introvert Writers' Community – Connect with like-minded writers in a supportive environment. Join here.

3. Subscribe to my newsletter – Get weekly tips on how to get paid for your words as a writer. Subscribe here.